"What a pig!"
My master screamed at me,
Miss tried telling " It’s nothing big ",
But he simply wouldn’t agree,
I put my head down and left the sty,
Cursing that one day I shall make my master cry,
He kept giving me cold looks as I bid good bye,
Laughing he said, " How are you gonna payback Pig ? Still try",
I threw a last look at my pack,
At Winnie, the cow and Sandra, the hen perched on a stack,
They all were sorry for me,
But couldn’t make their master, their enemy,
Out in the sun blistering in the day,
I weathered the storms as they say,
I dint have shelter and anything to wear,
Other farmers did glare, but why would they care,
I started falling sick and dizzy,
And then came the noisy sneeze,
Before I could pull out my hanky,
It flew away with a breeze,
A few days later the hen called on my phone,
Said the master was missing me, and felt lone,
She mentioned he was unwell,
I thought of her trying to work her spell,
A trick to get her friend back,
To chat as she stayed perched on her stack,
But her voice was sounding unusually serious,
And she wasn’t seeming her usual mischievous,
So I made up my mind,
Got ready and stretched my hind,
As I walked I kept growing worried, losing calm,
Thoughts rioting about master ailing on my farm,
With long strides and leaps I finally reached the destination,
Saw my master laid on the bed under heavy medication,
Couldn’t help tears rolling from my cheeks,
My Master had turned so feeble in only a few weeks,
I kept praying to god to return my curse back,
Soon I noticed his hand reaching for me utterly slack,
He brushed my hair as I noisily wept and cried,
Smiling he said, “What a Pig!” and slowly died.
- Abhishek.Dandekar
12 comments:
wow
its an amazin poem
very nicely written....
i was actually lost in d poem....
grt work done
damn cool.....do u have references to the animal farm???
hey this one was really good!
kool yaaa...its very good....sp. the last part...keep it up! waiting anxiously for your nxt blog.. :-)
Good Wrok Dandi..Dint knew u write soo well!! :)
Another comes the pig,O' what a Gig..
Here Comes Abhidan, O' Dan what a man
one more feather in your cap...
watte pig....
This poem has now revealed one more hidden area....It is self explanatory that how well u have mastered ur poet side. I m proud of u man. Keep going....
Good effort towards the approach....
keep it up and best wishes work for next one...
Ajay Pathak
did the master know he had the flu, which is why he made the guy leave or what? emotional but good...
Very Touchy Bunta
nice way to highlight issues.. keep it up
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